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PETER BERNHARDT,
 
 author of thrillers you want to read!
The Stasi File,
Opera and Espionage - A Deadly Combination, published by YouWriteOn.com. The book is available on Amazon/ Amazon Kindle and Barnes and Noble. Click on the following links:
 
 
                           
Quarter Finalist in 2011 Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award Contest. The opening chapters received the following two Amazon editorial reviews:
 
"The air of mystery is evident from the beginning. No reader would be left guessing at its genre. The action moves along perfectly and there is danger in the air. Very strong writing and perfect pacing. I certainly wanted to read more."
 
"The strongest aspect of this excerpt is definitely the suspense factor. When I finished reading, I just knew this was on the way to being a good suspense/thriller. Fantastic writing. This is a well polished piece of work and I think is on the way to being a great book."
            
 

Pitch

 

Dust from the demolished Berlin Wall has barely settled, the East German police state is teetering on the edge of collapse, and Stasi General HOLGER FRANTZ will stop at nothing to save it. Caught in his intrigue are two unlikely heroes: American lawyer ROLF KELLER and aspiring opera diva SYLVIA MAZZONI.   

 

Rolf, recently divorced and fresh off the bottle, is dispatched to his native Germany by the senior partner of his Washington law firm to coordinate the drop of top-secret documents by a defecting Stasi agent. Rolf is stunned to learn that Sylvia, his former lover during Berlin college days, has been coerced by West German intelligence into acting as courier with threats of exposing her youthful involvement with Red Army Faction terrorists.

 

Nothing has prepared these reluctant recruits for the Stasi’s ruthlessness. Although the first drop of stolen documents goes smoothly, subsequent arrangements end in a burst of violence that sends the pair fleeing into the East German countryside. Following clues left by the murdered defector, they unearth his document cache and escape into the night, pursued by armed Stasi henchmen.

 

Besides a file containing damning information about Sylvia, they recover documents with cryptic references to a plot for derailing unification by assassinating West Germany’s chancellor—but when and where? With Germany’s future hanging in the balance, Rolf and Sylvia manage to decipher the coded document in time to race to the assassination site. But a Stasi killer is waiting. As he marches them into a deserted clearing in the Bavarian woods, all seems lost—their effort to foil the assassins, German unification, and their very lives.

 

 
                   
Coming Soon:
 
Kiss of the Shaman's Daughter 
 
Pitch
 

Against the backdrop of New Mexico’s rugged Sangre de Cristo Mountains, aspiring diva Sylvia mazzoni combines her Santa Fe Opera engagement with a romantic reunion. But she and her lover, attorney Rolf Keller, get more than they bargained for when Rolf runs into archaeologist Charles Slater, a former law school classmate who, when they parted nine years ago, vowed revenge for Rolf’s part in getting him expelled just before graduation.   

Rolf wants to make amends, but Slater has other things on his mind: his recent find of priceless Indian artifacts and gold from the 1600s and the ruthless antiquities traffickers who are stalking him. To prove himself to the skeptical Rolf and Sylvia and win their help, Slater invites them to his ranch to see some of the treasure, but when they arrive, he has disappeared—vanished under circumstances that point to a violent abduction.  

The unexpected illness of the lead soprano gives Sylvia a chance at the title role in Tosca, but to win over the opera-savvy Santa Fe audience she must learn the production in only three days. While struggling to convert this challenge into the career triumph she has pursued all her life, she and Rolf are threatened by the smugglers who will stop at nothing to uncover Slater’s cache.  

Following clues left behind by Slater, Sylvia and Rolf discover a local Native American legend: an intriguing tale of the Pueblo Indian Revolt of 1680 and Teya, a shaman’s young daughter, who played a crucial role in the rebellion against the Spanish oppressors and in concealing the treasure of a lost pueblo.  

 

Now, three centuries later, the paths of Teya, Sylvia and Rolf are about to cross in this riveting historical thriller involving archaeological crime, southwestern history and grand opera.

 

 
On the basis of critiques from fellow writers, The Stasi File, was a Top-5 Novel on www.youwriteon.com, earning a professional review by Random House, and it was awarded a permanent spot on the site's Best Seller Chart. The Stasi File was a finalist for YouWriteOn's Book of the Year Award.  (Click on link below to see.)
 
 
 
What's it all about?
 

Dust from the demolished Berlin Wall has barely settled, the East German police state is teetering on the edge of collapse and Stasi General Holger Frantz will stop at nothing to save it. Caught in his intrigue are two unlikely heroes: American lawyer Rolf Keller, recently divorced, fresh off the bottle, and mysteriously dispatched by his senior partner to coordinate document drops by a defecting Stasi agent, and aspiring opera diva Sylvia Mazzoni, Rolf's former lover who has been coerced into acting as courier.

When the document drop goes fatally awry, the reluctant recruits flee into the East German countryside. They unearth the defector's secret document cache and uncover a covert assassination plot. As they struggle to decipher the plan, a Stasi killer stalks their every step. When he marches them into the Bavarian woods, all seems lost—their effort to foil the assassins, German unification, and their very lives.

 

 
Take a look at these recent reviews by fellow writers on www.youwriteon.com and a professional review below:
 
The opening section of this novel reads like the best of the best-seller/thrillers on sale at any high street book shop. The writing is excellent and the pace is perfect. [T]he key ingredients for any good story are plot, characters and information. This piece has all in spades.

I have no doubt that this book will be picked up and published. It is targeting a clear market and is an accomplished and deserving piece of work. I wish its author every success!
 

Tension, drama and setting. This has it all.

An extremely well written piece that intrigued me from the beginning to its end. To me it had a touch of Robert Ludlum and John Grisham . . .

 

Cheers for a smashing read.

[I]t held my attention throughout and I enjoyed it very much. You are obviously an accomplished writer and this reads as well as any published work. The characters were interesting, consistent and believable, the settings were conveyed effectively and the narrative voice was compelling. Use of language was excellent . . . All in all, an extremely impressive piece.

In the very first paragraph I began to feel I knew Sylvia; I'd probably recognise her if I saw her in the street. 

I think you have a good international espionage tale going here. The plot seems well thought out, the characters are interesting and plausible, and the settings are very nicely written.

Excellent story. I was captivated within the first few paragraphs.

And here is the professional review:

Random House Readers' Group Feedback on The Stasi File
 

This historic novel introduced me to a topic I was surprisingly unfamiliar with. The history of the Red Army Faction is an uncommon background to a story. Cleanly woven into the fall of the Berlin wall and the start of Germany’s new future, I found it rich and engaging, even in only the first few chapters of the story.
 
All three starting points, in East Germany, West Germany and in the US, offer the reader a huge amount of detail to start the plot off. I am often wary of such approach as too much detail up front can often lead to reader overload, or at the least a sense of the author handing everything on a plate. But in this case it walks the line between them very carefully.
 
There are two scenes that particularly drew my attention. The first, with Sylvia in the Park, and the second with Rolf going to visit the senior partner.
 
Sylvia’s attack in the park comes completely out of the blue. I was just taking in the details of the previous paragraphs and starting to place where and when the story is set, when the assault by the RAF member started. While the section only lasts a few paragraphs I could feel my heart racing at the sudden change of pace. This is a good technique to engage the reader. This then set my interest at a higher level for the rest of the piece.
 
One suggestion here might be to lighten slightly the details before the attack. Not by much as it was all well written. It would just ensure that a browsing reader could be engaged slightly quicker.
 
The second scene was Rolf's. Here the first sentence changes the scene well, while skilfully keeping a semblance of pace from the Park scene. It also manages to quickly capture the essence of Rolf’s outlook. A view which is expanded upon as we are introduced to Mr Stein. The following exchange would be worthy of any great court room drama and quickly reveals the real Rolf.
 
The third scene with Dobnik, while less enjoyable for me than the first two, is equally well handled. It has a distinctly darker theme and highlights the different shades with which the author paints the scenes. Using this colouring to hint at three different worlds that would eventually collide as the story progresses.
 
I think this is a Stirling effort that I enjoyed reading. With a small amount of effort to engage the reader as soon as possible, this could be even better! Congratulations to the Author for getting to the Top Ten, a worthy achievement indeed!

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Interested? You can read the first chapter by clicking on "Chapter 1 of The Stasi File" Page. And you'll find more reviews and readers' comments on "What Others Say About The Stasi File."